I love the last couple of panels with Fang and Zedwig, where Zedwig just looks resigned while Fang's all sharp edges. I'd be paranoid too, if I were Fang, because I half expect Zedwig to do something crazy out of desperation.
Lissy
· 1 year ago
A wonderful, paradoxal scene, and so full of character too! Fang is paranoid because he thinks Sanguine will kill him, because that is what he would do. a traitor always thinks everyone is going to betray him. also, he is willing to let Zedwig die to save himself, so he thinks zedwig is the same way.
And I second the opinion that the second to last panal is beautiful in the contrast between Fang and Zedwig. Also, bravo on lighting up their faces with the light of the explosion but not including sound, which gives a sense of distance to it.
Amy
· 1 year ago
fan looks so good in that last panel there. poor zedwig i wish he could get through to fang.
michou
· 1 year ago
Oh... My... GOD.
maeverin
· 1 year ago
wow...panel six, just...wow no cheesy "kaboom!", just the light of the fire reflected on their hair and skin. that, my friends, is what is called excellent story telling. <applauds>
Archeress
· 1 year ago
I love the second to last panel. Or...last...whatever you want to call it. I wish I could give Zedwig a hug.
I also like how Zedwig always calls him "Fangline" instead of Fang.
Zadiena
· 1 year ago
I know this might be getting old, but I absolutely LOVE the last panel with Fang and Zedwig. They both need hugs in my opinion. It's also not only a contrast in lines, it's also in their personalities. It's so cool how fang's eyes look gold in the last panel too. Over all Love the page, the art work is amazing(as always) =)
HelenaHermione
· 1 year ago
Wow...Chapter 13 is done; it had a lot in it, so much of Fang/Zedwig and Bactine/Al'bert, the whole 'War or Peace' of these odd relationships-not necessarily intimate, but in the worst of times, before the start of disaster, sometimes you've got to realize that there are those by your side even if you feel like you're alone. Of course, it's also the 'War or Peace' prelude to just before the battle-this took almost all of 2008, or at least half, but now Chapter 14-let's go on till 09!
Brenda
· 1 year ago
Fang is gorgeous is that last panel =]
spas
· 1 year ago
talk about an unhealthy relationship! agreed, what an exciting chapter - take your time writing the next one - this is worth it!
Shogun
· 1 year ago
Great page, but I do have one question. Did the viewing angle change between panels six and seven, or did Fang and Zedwig pull a switcheroo while we weren't looking? By the way, I love the little * mark over Fang's head in panel three when he decides that Zedwig is trying to kill him.
Falco
· 1 year ago
Camera angle, yeah. First the angle is from inside the room looking out, then switches to outside looking into the room.
lizybeth
· 1 year ago
I think that * was a far-off planet exploding. Every time Fang gets angry, a civilization goes to ruin.
LJ
· 1 year ago
I have so much love for these last 2 pages (and for all of it, just those in particular). Just wanted to make that known =)
llamaofhappiness
· 1 year ago
You know what I've glimpsed several times in this chapter?
Maybe this is too family-friendly for that. Just keep it in mind. ;-)
Mia
· 1 year ago
This page gave me the shivers! Great work as always!
Lu
· 1 year ago
Keep up the good work!
Li
· 1 year ago
6th panel: stop look so darn angsty, Zedwig! (I mean, you're only going to be forced to murder people resulting in the downfall of your civilization and your own demise.)
Shogun
· 1 year ago
I've finally remembered what Sangwine's name reminds me of! I knew resembled a real word since I started reading Lint, but I haven't been able to think of it until now. Colby, is Sangwine named for sanguine, which is having blood as the dominant humor, and thus being optimistic, cheery, passionate, etc?
All Comments
I'd be paranoid too, if I were Fang, because I half expect Zedwig to do something crazy out of desperation.
And I second the opinion that the second to last panal is beautiful in the contrast between Fang and Zedwig. Also, bravo on lighting up their faces with the light of the explosion but not including sound, which gives a sense of distance to it.
no cheesy "kaboom!", just the light of the fire reflected on their hair and skin.
that, my friends, is what is called excellent story telling.
<applauds>
I also like how Zedwig always calls him "Fangline" instead of Fang.
...Zedwig's clavicle.
We've already seen some elf abdomen, what's next? Sangwine pulling the legs of his trousers up to step over a puddle and giving us a view of his ankle? Or even--maybe this is too risqué to suggest--some patella d'Albert?
Maybe this is too family-friendly for that.
Just keep it in mind. ;-)