Oh my goodness, it looks amazing! Absolutely gorgeous, amazing work.
Dani
· 1 year ago
Um... oh dear? I don't think I like the title to this chapter. It portends Not Good things.
Erulisse
· 1 year ago
Oh my! This is beautiful! I love your water effects <3 But.... The portent of this cover seems foreboding for Bactine. Bactine reminds me of Princess Leia, wearing that. I have no idea why. O_o
Anthony
· 1 year ago
Dang you, fortune teller! Dang you to the deepest, darkest, dankest pits of heck! This is such a moving title page. I'm caught somewhere between wanting to save her and drifting away with her. I feel my will dissolving, but with dissolved boundaries such a peaceful release. No more striving... just surrender.
Lu
· 1 year ago
That's how i feel too... (and is this who i think it is...?)
Archeress
· 1 year ago
She looks so beautiful... so peaceful. It makes me feel sad and far away.
I think I'll be really sad if ANYONE dies.
P.S. @Anthony: LOL!! That was my FAVORITE Xylic line from the early days! ;D
HelenaHermione
· 1 year ago
Oh! It's just so...I knew you were going to change the chapter title page, but this is just so completely different! That shimmering expanse of light blue like water, just beneath the surface of the universe, and then to have Bactine just appear like that...right above 'Sacrifice'...very artistic, but yes, very foreboding. Somebody in a creative writing class I had yesterday was reading a short story of how they had almost drowned as a child, almost falling and drifting away like that.
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But.... The portent of this cover seems foreboding for Bactine.
Bactine reminds me of Princess Leia, wearing that. I have no idea why. O_o
This is such a moving title page. I'm caught somewhere between wanting to save her and drifting away with her. I feel my will dissolving, but with dissolved boundaries such a peaceful release. No more striving... just surrender.
I think I'll be really sad if ANYONE dies.
P.S. @Anthony: LOL!! That was my FAVORITE Xylic line from the early days! ;D